צריכה עזרה מאנשים שהאנגלית שלהם טובה/שפת אם

From the quote, I learned that we live for making another peoples lives less difficult as possible.
The quote is referring to the poem by saying that we should help each other.
For example, no act most small means that we should support other people, even if its the smallest thing, its still important.
Moreover, the poet says that count that day as worst then lost, which means that if we dont help other people, we waste our days.
In conclusion, we all need to remember stand side by side no matter what.
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