מישהו שמבין אנגלית ויכול להגיד לי אם כתבתי בסדר?

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Okay so, actually, lots of people here really do want to be soldiers in the army because it can greatly contribute to their future (depending on the role theyll have).

You can choose to be a warrior, or choose to be in the office and maybe work in in cyber security with computers.
Usually, people choose their role in the military according to the job they will choose in their future.

People write in their resumes what they did in the military. So, if they were in a senior position or one that is difficult to get into, it will be easier for them to get hired to a job. The military role also gives a lot of experience, so if someone wants to work with computers in the future, he will try to get accepted to a unit that deals with computers.