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One day, as I was walking along the beach,
Someone suddenly called me, "Son of a bitch."
The words, they struck, a sharpened blade,
In my heart, a shadow stayed.

I smiled, I laughed, I played it cool,
But inside burned a raging pool.
Each echo louder than before,
Their voice a tide, my hope no more.

The waves seemed soft, the sky so wide,
But in my soul, no place to hide.
I wandered far, where no one knew,
The sea embraced, the world withdrew.

Beneath the stars, I made my bed,
Where words can't hurt, and tears have fled.