היי כתבתי פואמה אשמח לכל ביקורת (אנגלית)

Sat around the campfire 7 scared and foolish men with weapons sheathed
Among them was a fortune teller his voice begetting treason
He looked at each man with a wicked grin
And announced hell now teach each all the things that lay there waiting above reason.


Beyond creation lies a foundry where stars are made and dance and die.
Wolves chase with killing intent round and round the Sun's watchful eerie eye

Were all bound to earth by destiny not force
Each man is a king of serpents and must move on forward with no remorse

Never trust a shadow for there lie deadly things that slither
Go for the neck and never dwindle on a kill lest you be the one left to rot and wither

Only the richest among men may enter heaven, let wealth be your judge
Do not falter and look backwards, for no god holds a grudge.


Sat around the smoldering campfire 1 man with a twisted smile
7 naked bodies lay there in prayer, faces twisted into elated salvation
Those among us who Decide to cloud the truth
They can show endless imagination