מישהו יכול לבדור מכתב שכתבתי באנגלית (דקדוק, עניין..) בתגובות

שואל השאלה:
thursday, january 29, 2015
a friendly letter
dear sutton,
i haven't heard from you for a long time, where have you been?
the last time i saw you was a year ago and now i heard the news. i wish we could meet earlier because i had so many things to tell you. now that i know you are dead, i have so many things to ask you who killed you sutton? and why? did you commited suicide?
i know you were in some trouble, but i can't imagine that kind of things. i was been told about your twin sister, emma. she looks exactly like you! are you mad at her because she used your identity? oh, and i heard about your "lying game". really sutton? youve changed.
i'm aware to the fact that my questions won't get answers, at least not from you.
i will miss you, i have to go,
your friend

שואל השאלה:
נכתב על פי הספר " משחקי השקר" (the lying game)

נראה לי שזה
?did you commit suicide
בגלל שפועל בעבר הוא בverb1

i wish we could have met earlier.
did you commit suicide.
i was told /\ i've been told.

שואל השאלה:
אבל זה נראה לכם טוב בגדול?

בגדול, זה טוב, רשמת את זה בצורה טובה ^^