שיעורי בית באנגלית (מונולוג), אתם יכולים לתקן לי שגיאות בבקשה?

So I was thinking a lot about the subject I'll talk about today. It was something between "I want to talk about something important and make the world a better place" and "I want to talk about my favorite broadcast". I choose the broadcast, because I'm really into science these days. The broadcast is about a friendly desert community, where the sun is hot, the moon is beautiful, and mysterious lights pass overhead while we all pretend to sleep, cald Night Vale. The main character, Cecil Palmer, is a radio host, and the broadcats is actually his radio show. The other characters, like his brother in low Steve, his boyfriend Carlos, the faceless old woman who secretly lives in your home, Hirom McDanial, the angels, and others, are often reminded in this show.
In almost every episode there is some kind of apocalyps, and at the most dramatic moment, Cecil taking us... To the weather.
Now, I can't really tell you about the episodes because of spoilers, so I'll just tell you the most important things about Night Vale.
1. Carlos has perfect hair, so don't you dare to cut it.
2. Stay away from the dog park.
3. Angels, mountains, and the moon don't exist.
4. If you see wheat or wheat byproducts-run.
5. Libraries and librarians are highly dangerous.
6. Hail the mighty glow clowd.
7. Basically all the good things are neat.
8. To insult a Night Vale fan just tell them they have a happy and productive smile.
9. If you love someone, set them free. Set them free now. This is the police. We have you surrounded.
Good night, Night Vale, good night.