כתבתי שיר קצר, מה דעתכם?

(כתבתי בשורות מסודרות בתגובות אם בא לכם) יצא שזה באנגלית, אבל תגידו לי מה אתם חושבים. וגם אם יש איזו טעות דקדוקית תגידו לי ,like the day like the night ,with you everything feels right, i keep looking at you, you are never out off my sight. when you walk around, i keep looking down, you are my king, youre the one to wear the crown. what do i find in you, i dont know, youre friendly and funny, you steal the show. i like it when you smile, it makes me feel complete, and of corse you are amazingly handsome, no one can compete. i wish we talked more, because i like looking into your eyes, its like looking to the sky, in the sunrise. how did this happen, i wish i knew, but when i met you, butterflies flew. maybe its not, maybe its true, .but i would love to say, that i love you אני לא מתכוונת לשלוח לו את זה, אבל סתם היה כיף לפרוק קצת חחח...