אני מתחילה לכתוב שיר, יש לבינתיים שגיאות?

3 am and thoughts not gonna stop
it makes me feel like i'm really messed up
hours like seconds and breathe it's an hope
you wrong if you think that i forgot

And i'm just spinning spinning spinning like a shity dope
Go care bout what missing missing missing , how can i not ?
Ho god its pissed me off
My heart is on the flor
And always thinking thinking thinking i can't without you