מבינים מה כתבתי באנגלית או שצריך לשפר?

She was also beautiful both externally and internally, we were all in love with her to the depths of our soul, she was perfect,
An angel who came to visit our world and returned too soon to heaven, such an angel so beautiful and glamorous, an angel who gave us a gift.
We came to Raise her soul of Amy, Amy lives forever, her father Mitch and her mother Janis, feel Amy, and we will continue to elevate her and immortalize her forever.
We had such a wonderful gift.