כתבתי שיר (באנגלית) מה דעתכם? יש לו לחן כבר גם (לא גמור)

Living, breathing, knowing that everything's gonna change
The game is over, im devustated by all of the hand grenades
Trying to go on, but there you are in front of me
And you start to kill my life before my eyes, thats what i see
You
Everyday
Everywhere
When im here
You are there
Showing up
Taking air
And you dont care
Why are you here?
Destroying me
Taking me away
Can not be free
So inoccent
Stealing my sanity
Away from me
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