מי שיודע טוב אנגלית פליז תכנסו

יש לי עבודה באנגלית, עשיתי על קווין (הלהקה) אתם יכולים לקרוא שנייה ותגידו אם יש לי שגיאות?

Hello everyone, my name is **** and today I'm going to tell you about one of my favorite music bands called "Queen".

Actually I started like Queen not long ago, but then I heard it and literally felled in love. My passion to their music keeps grow by time, I admiring the incredible sounds they created, all the musical Instruments and their amazing soloist, his voice, his passion to his one music and the way he performing.

I'm still amazed by the way queen affected the world, I mean, I can bet that almost everyone I know have heard about them at least once, even if they can't recognized the name "Queen", I'm sure that they can recognized some songs. In addition, in October 24 (2018) came out a movie which tells the story of the band, about their music and the extraordinary lead singer Freddie Mercury.
One of my favorite Queen's song is "Bohemian Rhapsody", I love the vocal talent, the lyrics, the musical Instruments and specially the guitar.
...this song still considered one of the best songs in the history