האם כתבתי נכון באנגלית ?צריך לתקן משהו?

I'm going to your room in my heart and taking out all of our memories albums from the shelves in this room.
I'm sitting on the cold floor and relying on your bed with my back.
lighting up my cigarette.

I'm opening the albums one after one,looking at our pictures,gray and empty images from content.
I'm taking the lighter I lit the cigarette with,I burning every picture apart and throw it on the bed behind me.

I'm not even crying, I'm indifferent.
I'm working technically and do what I should have done a long time ago.

Your bed is burning in flames behind me.

I'm taking a bottle of demand and pouring it all around the room.
I'm taking out a match and lighting it on fire,throwing it on the floor .

I'm walking out of your room in my heart and lock it, taking the lighter and burning the door too.

I'm taking a few steps back, joining hands and looking at my artwork.

I'm taking my cigarette out of my mouth and saying aloud:
"To new beginnings"