קטע כתיבה שלי, מה אתם חושבים? (באנגלית)

(סורי על טעויות אנגלית לא שפת אם).

Where would you go if you could?
Who would you take?
You know I will run with you to anywhere youd say.
And thats the problem with me,
It has nothing to do with you.
Im new to this kind of addiction,
But youre a new version of a drug.
Since Ive met you I stopped to smoke,
Yknow?
I realized the only thing I want to breathe was your smell.
Cause youve been a new addiction
That I forgot about all the rest.
You're my drug that Im willing
To do anything to take.