מה אתם חושבים על הכתיבה שלי (פסקה באנגלית)

About a year and a half I went by myself to my family that lives in the southern Israel in a little locality that called Midreshet Ben Gurion.
My mom drove me to Afula Central Station and I took the bus to Beer Sheva Central Station. My cousin, Neta waited there for me. We wandered around the mall a bit and took another bus to my uncle's house. I stayed there for 3 days and had a lot of fun.
Neta introduced me to her friends and we walked around the locality and talked, they were so nice. The next day Neta took me to the cliff, near Ben Gurion grave and we watched the sunset, not far away there is a telescope, we saw the stars and the moon. It was amazing. Later that night we watched our favorite movie. The morning that I left my aunt gave my cookies and drove me to Beer Sheva Central Station and this time I got the train.
I love being there, Although hot there but there is no humidity and I get time with my family that I only meet a few times a year.



אני ממש אשמח אם תגידו לי איפה יש לי טעויות