מישהו שמבין באנגלית (די פשוטה) ויכול להגיד אם מה שאכתוב בתגובות תקין ונכון מבחינה דקדוקית?

שואל השאלה:
wednesday, april 13th 2016
dear grandma,
i like do with you many interesting things, for exemple cook or read books.
i like your meals.
i like when you read me interesting stories.
i remember the stories you read me when i was baby.
with you interesting all the time.
love you,
dana

מתוקן:
dear grandma,
i like to do with you many interesting things, for example cook or read books.
i like your meals.
i also like when you read to me interesting stories.
i remember the stories you used to read to me when i was a baby.
with you, it's interesting all the time.
love you,
dana

נראה לי שזה נכון יותר ככה
wednesday, 13th of april, 2016
dear grandma,
i like to do with you many interesting things, like cooking or reading.
i like your meals.
i also like it when you read to me interesting stories.
i remember the stories you used to read me when i was a baby.
with you it's always interesting.
love you,
dana

wednesday, april 13th 2016
dear grandma
i like to do with you many interesting things. for example cooking or reading books.
i like your meals.
i like it when you read interesting stories to me.
i remember the stories you used to read me when i was a baby.
with you it's interesting all the time.
love you,
dana