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מילים שלי. לחן של say you won't let go. של James Artur.
רק על הבית הראשון.
I remember when we met,
It felt so right.
Now I'm trying to forget,
But I can't without a fight.
All the time that we were spent,
In texts and laugh.
I think I'm not regret,
But thoughts are not enough.

When you put your head on my shoulder,
It was a minute but it felt much longer,
I felt I'll never be upset.
Then you said "the weather getting colder",
And I realized that the moment was over,
You are the one I won't forget.

You had a boyfriend then,
but I never know.
I think you treated me
as the second on the row.
I know that loving you
is just so wrong,
And this the reason that
I chose to write this song.

*I'm trying let you go*
*I'm trying let you go*