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Been up all night,because of you
I cant deny my feelings to you
You like my other half,u know its true
Otherwise way would you say u love me
too,
You put your hands on my hips
Lean your head and kiss my lips
But then you stop and move your hands
Make me lose all common senses ,
You say its me not you leaving me without a
clue
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