הי- אשמח לשמוע את דעתכם על הכתיבה שלי.

כתבתי שיר על הקשר שהיה לי, ש האמ.. לא הייתי בו "החברה האולימטיבית", וזה די גרם להמון עצבים מהצד השני, בכל מקרה, הנה:
(עשיתי העתק הדבק מהפתקים בmacbook אז, הסימני פסיק זזו אל הצד השני)

you have the time to complain,
well i don't have the time to maintain,
the beauty in us is a complex desire we both love to share
well i don't have the time, and i don't have the courage,
to fight it to death, its not that simple and you already know it

weather dry inside your room
and all you wish that everything would be wet
searching for gold, could turn into a whole life adventure,
who is pretty tough, and i don't want it to break the bond

forgive me, i had been a disaster
and all i can do, is to sorry for days
but i love you, you are my heart and my soul,
forgive me, i had been a disaster.