שיר שכתבתי באנגלית, מה דעתכם?

The darkness of today
Will fade away
And you will stay
Someday

Everything will go my was
With no delay
A clean driveway
Someday

I will rise, i will se
What i want, i will feel
How it is, to be alive

Someday
Someday

The darkness of this year
Will disappear
And will killed
Someday

The light will tear her throat
And take you home
Where you belong
Someday

You will risez you will se
What you want, you will feel
How it is, to be alive

Someday
Someday
Someday
Today