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In one hour i and my friends will arrive to Los Angeles
We are going to join to the new clubhouse that belong to google.
So after a week in here I can tell you how is it live here .
Its appear to be really fun here .
The rules are simple we are sharing our resources like money ,food and most important is success .
If someone succeed we are all succeed as a community .
So if u want to come here you need t מo set you mind to this idea .
So our job is to play video Games and Compete in tournaments .
Our main goal is to get better in video games and to get wins in the tournaments .
Each win the team who won is getting 1000 dollar in cash ,than we share it with the clubhouse .
Our coaches is a volunteer .
We are not only playing video games once a week we are doing a running race .
I think it is worth it rather than live as individual.
Unfortunately not everyone can come here .
You need to be really good player with strong mentality .