כתבתי שיר... אשמח לחוות דעת

אז זה שיר שכתבתי על מישהי שאני מחבב כרגע, היא הראשונה שלא יוצאת לי מהראש מאז הפרידה שלי מהחברה האחרונה שלי... אשמח שתגידו לי מה דעתכם

I just can't seem to,
put my finger on it
But there's this thing about you,
I don't want to live without it.
My life is full of doubt
But you're a ray of light
That gives me a way out,
A fair chance to fight.
You are an inspiration
Something about your smile,
Just makes me want to write
So I guess I'll do it, I'll
Tell you how I feel
I don't think you'll ever see this,
But I just need to write it,
To put it out as lyrics.
You are so kind, so fine, you remind
Me of this image that I had in my mind
Of the woman that I'll marry
The woman I'll make my lady
But I was so young at the time,
And I guess that lately...
I've changed, I'm not the same as I was before
She changed me, I don't know if it's for the better
Or the worse.
Maybe you'll be able to bring me back,
To save me from myself,
To save me from my past.