אנשים שטובים באנגלית עזרה דחוףף בבקשה תכנסו זה דחוףף

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A year ago, my family and I were camping in the deer forest in the Ramat hagolan.
The place itself had many attractions such as horseback riding, a tour of the place, a petting zoo, a souvenir shop, a playground and more.
When we got there in the morning, the first thing we did was build the tent so that we had somewhere to sleep at night.
The rest of the day we toured the place and enjoyed the attractions.
Towards evening we were on fire.
In the morning and in the afternoon it was hot but at night it was really cold.
My brother and I enjoyed ourselves and our father too.