רק לאנשים שטובים באנגלית

gals eyes became worried
נראה לי
עם צופציק בין הl לs (אבל זה לא נותן לי לעשות)

eyes gal's became to worried.

זה לא gals eyes?
זה לא אנגלית נכונה השני

איך eyes gals??

gal's eyes became worried.
skylight בתרגום חופשי רשמת גל העיניים נהפכו למודאגות..

gal's eyes became concern

concerned

gal's eyes were worried/concerned
gal's eyes became troubled
gal's eyes became worried
gal had a worried look/expression upon his face
gal had a haunted look in his eyes
the expression in gal's eyes became hunted
there was an unsettling expression in gal's eyes
gal cast a worried look/frown
the look/expression in gal's eyes became hunted
gal had a troubled look
gal had an anxious look
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יש גם ביטוי:
knit one's eyebrows

יש גם צירוף יפה:
brooding eyes
או:
brooding expression in someone's eyes
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brood מילה נהדרת שקשורה בהירהור (לרוב דברים שליליים, דאגות וכו)
brood over something