מה אתם חושבים על השיר שכתבתי? באנגלית, שיר רוק. קוראים לו feel like in hell

השיר:
I have a darker side,
I never let you see,
And I just want it out,
'Cuz it controlling me,

After what I did,
There's no way you'll forgive me.
I've tried I've tried I've tried to control it, but it does it does it does just what it's want.
I tried to take this, tame this, vanish it to hell.
I just need u to believe that it's not the real me.

Cuz I feel like in hell.
Cuz I feel like in hellllllllllllll.
Cuz I feel like in hell.
Cuz cuz cuz cuz I feel like in hell.

So tell me what u think
About the beast inside
Just tell me u don't scared
That it take me apart

After what I did,
There's no way that you'll ever forgive me.
I've tried I've tried I've tried to control it, but it does it does it does just what it's want.
I tried to take this, tame this, vanish it to hell.
I just need u to believe that it's not the real me.

Cuz I feel like in hell.
Cuz I feel like in hellllllllllllll.
Cuz I feel like in hell.
Cuz cuz cuz cuz I feel like in hell.


So tell me tell me tell me
U don't scared
So tell me tell me tell me
U don't panic
Just please tell me tell me
U believe in me
Tell me tell me
U know
How to
Take this
Freaking animallllllllllllllllll



מה חושבים?
דרך אגב השגיאות (למשל you dont scared זה בכוונה במקום youre not scared)