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Should students be allowed to use cell phones at school?
As everyone knows, there are schools where students are not allowed to use phones even during breaks. This decision has caused much controversy. There are many people that agree with it, or alternatively think that this decision will make students more focused on their studies.
The first reason to be for using cell phones at school is that there are students who do not fit into the society and the phone is their haven, and they can talk to friends who attend other schools, play games and listen to music.
Another reason is that the phone can serve as a potential source of information where students can formulate information about the lesson topic, and if an emergency happens, parents can be called when needed, or alternatively, students will be able to receive urgent calls.
My first argument against allowing phones at school is that students can easily cheat and copy in tests with the phones.
Another reason is that there have been quite a few instances of shaming and disseminating intimate / unflattering pictures without the Consent of the person photographed.
In my opinion, students should be allowed to use cell phones at school because Most often, the phones are used by students for educational purposes like taking pictures from the board of the material they couldn't copy, hearing music that for some people even help focus on their studies, checking what time it is to know when the break is over, being available in case an emergency happens ... In conclusion , the phone is very helpful at school and I think that phones need to be allowed at school.
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