מה דעתכם על השיר שכתבתי באנגלית?

I wish i could stand on a star
I wish i could be where you are
They say:"dont you ever give up?"Its so hard to be something where you're not.
But i have walked alone with the stars in the moonlit night.
I have walked alone,no one by my side.
Now i walk with you with my head held high.
In the darkest sky i feel so alive.
Adrift a lonely little cloud.
Above ground where i stand so proud.
My face glowing loudly through the crowd.
As i walk with the beauty of the night.