כתבתי מכתב למשימה באנגלית,אשמח מי שטוב באנגלית שיוכל לבדוק ולראות אם הכל טוב מבחינה דיקדוקית (אשמח ממש לעזרה!)

Dear Mr.Kelada
Hey, Its me Mrs.Ramsy
.I dont know How am I supposed to thank you for what you did
..You risked you even though you didn't have to
.You saw me how I felt in a complicated situation, unfortunately my husband didn't see me the way you saw
.Everyone says you don't know how to differentiate between pearls, you know more than that, you know how to see people accurately and well
.So here's your hundred dollar bill, and my thanks to you
.Hope I will meet you again
Yours,Mrs.Ramsy