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מילים שלי ולחן של simphony של Zara Larsson.

Iv'e been with her just a week,
I felt in love right when I saw her,
I think this crush just make weak,
Without her everything is worthless,
She told me she's not alone,
Since then my heart is broke to pieces,
And now I'm sleeping on my own,
Dreeming about her and her kisses.

I can't be strong, 'couse it feels like shit
That someone else has took my seet,
And since she've gone, i feel incomplete
'Couse if you want the truth..I just wanna be part of your life ***, to hold you tight and never throw, oh ***.. 'Couse it hearts like hell that you let me go.

I'm stupid that I felt in love,
But how can I forget my feelings,
I know she thinks I'm not enough,
Don't tell me she's the one who missing,
I can't forget her shiny smile,
Or the way that she was laughing,
I hope tommorow sun will shine,
And cure my heart that still is bleeding.

I can't be strong, 'couse it feels like shit
That someone else has took my seet,
And since she've gone, i feel incomplete
'Couse if you want the truth..I just wanna be part of your life ***, to hold you tight and never throw, oh ***.. 'Couse it hearts like hell that you let me go.