זה נכון תחבירי?ובכללי זה כתוב טוב?

I'm agree with the issue written in the newspaper - to ban the entry of vehicles into the city center Firstly today there are a lot of cars and they emit a lot of air pollution And causes many diseases for example asthma In addition many cars create traffic jams that harm the quality of life of many people That it causes them to arrive late for work and it is also life threatening when a security vehicle has to bring a patient to the hospital it is delayed more And when a law is passed against the entry of cars into major cities it will help reduce air pollution Which causes many diseases and in addition it will reduce traffic jams and the destruction of green areas of nature in favor of roads due to the increase in the purchase of private cars In conclusion, in light of what I have written above If I were in the government I would like to try to enact a law that prevents vehicles from entering cities