כתבתי משהו שאני דיי גאה בו... מה דעתכם? (באנגלית) - קישור מצורף

I came back home late that night. I was tired and drunk, and I could hardly stand up. "Come on, Honey, just two more hours." I whispered to myself.
I threw my bag on the bed and went straight to the bathroom. I washed my face, undressed myself and went under the cold stream of water, washing the shame away.
Ryan doesn't want me. Ryan doesn't love me. He thinks I'm disgusting, ugly, unworthy of his attention. What did I expect? That a prince like him would be interested in a simple person like me?
Stupid! What were you thinking? I got out of the shower and looked in the mirror. I looked at my simple face, my simple body.
"Why am I even trying?" I asked the figure in the mirror. And then the answer hit me, clear and sharp.
"You're not."

זה באנגלית כי ההשראה לזה באה מתמונה בפינטרסט שאמורה לתת רעיונות בשביל אימוני כתיבה, והרעיון שעלה לי עבד לי יותר טוב באנגלית מאשר בעברית אז זרמתי עם ההשראה.
בקישור יש את התמונה ^-^
אז מה דעתכם?